Thursday, November 19, 2015

Week 13: story telling

Long ago, in land that had lucious forests,  beatiful citys, and grand armies lived a giant with five heads. This giant had 10 arms and an apitiet equal to no other. Each of the five heads had a different pwers. One could breathe fire, One could breathe ice, one was smart, one was evil and one was nice.The giant ravage the lands. It destroyed army after army, village after village and challenege even the gods. This giant even attacked yama, the god of the under world. The god of the underworld fought hades for days and finally he was eaten byone of the heads. The god of the underworld then in the stomach if the beast, sliced him open inturn killing him. Now then the giant was resurrected by the high preiest of the giants. The giant knowing how defeated he was began  praying to Mahdeva, the god of destriction. He sacrficed every thing he had to please the god .He sacfroced villages, animals, and gold but nothing happened.  He then decided to cut of his own heads to please the deity.  He cut off all his heads excep one . The gid this as a valid sacrfice and granted him one thing. The giant wished to be the stongest of warriors. Knowing how strong he attacked everything without a seconds moment. Everyone feared his strength and might. The gods even ran away at the sound of the giant approaching. However, there was rumored to be one warrior strong enogh to challenge the giant. This lone warrior did not run away from the giant. The two fought for three years. The battle could be heard around the world. Every time the warrior sliced a head off another one would grow in its place.  Every time the giant attacked he would lose an arm. Knowing his situation the warror haf to make a rash move. The warrior attempt to slice off all heads of the giants.  The giant then struck the warrior mid slice crushing his body into the ground. The warrior laid there restless and dead. Soon after a dragon flew towards the giant. The dragon burned the giant with its fiery breath. The fight continued but the giant held stead fast and behead the dragon with his bare hands. The people revered and fear him for they knew if could destry them at anytime but also he could destroy their enemies also.

(Giant, websource: telegraph.co.uk)

Author's note:
I didnt have any ideas. My original ideas was to do a story about marriage but my.story did make any sense. The orginal  story is about a giant with five is killed by warrior. A dragon then appears and is slayed by the warrior.

Bibliography:
The indian st george. Devi. http://babel.hathitrust.org/cgi/pt?id=uc1.c100532900;view=1up;seq=74;skin=mobile

3 comments:

  1. Hey Davis!
    So I haven't heard of this story before so that makes me glad that I got to read your story before I finished up the semester. I think the closer we get the more I feel like I"ve read everything that is public domain but of course I haven't! So it was a great story, but there were a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that I assume are from having written it in the knick of time. Thank for the story Davis!

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  2. Hi Davis,
    You wrote “apitiet”, I think you meant appetite instead. Other mistakes I notices is that instead of powers, you wrote “pwers” and instead of by one, you wrote “byone”. I think you should probably proof read your story because there were some parts I didn’t understand what you were talking about. However, overall it was a good story.

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  3. Hi Davis. I really enjoyed reading your story. It really liked the mythology feel to this story. I also like it’s very action packed. I would definitely proofread your story next time to check for any typos or misspellings. Good work on this story, though. Good luck with the rest of your semester.

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